10/23/2005

Love..

An arbit poem about love, no rythm, no nothing..but anyways, jus felt like writing one..

What is it that happens to us when we are in love,
Why does the world seem to hold no meaning at all,
You could spend ages with her, chatting away,
And yet not feel the tide of time passing away.

You see her in your eyes, all time of the day,
Little do you realise what you gotto pay,
As you dream of her throughout the day,
God only help you, hold your way.

You know very well your concentration is lapsing,
But alas! You're helpless, it's not your fault,
Then do you realise how tough this is,
Studies and love together are surely taxing!

You know she's all in life you need,
And never to anything else could you pay any heed,
But a good boy as ever you were,
You give it your best, well, to forget her.

Lo! Time is taking its toll on you,
You're unable to manage the pressure,
As you vacillate between the books and her,
Shivering at thoughts of grades that summer.

But no, it turns out much tougher,
As you start feeling inseparable from her,
Of your future, as your mind reminds you,
You curse your fate, your mind in a hullaballo.

But you see, God's always there,
Watching you with the ever smiling face,
How to get you out, does he know,
Provided you take time off to give him a bow.

So God's what does the trick,
And gets you out, well before any hitch,
And then you go on a studying spree,
With the thought ' God! Can I fall in love when I am free?'

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

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Cleo

Anonymous said...

My , my , CB , haven't you become the eternal , insatiable romantic . Great blog dude , I can so relate to what you say. But what intrigues me is , who's the source of the inspiration, who's the bonny lass , the fair maiden , the Rapunzel whose long locks have spun a grasp around your heart , eh eh !!!

Makam said...

hmm...CB...the poem is just great,..no need to even get a second opinion abt that,...

but the girl in your mind..getting all sorts of shady feelings da :D

CB said...

@leftit
Don't worry da..There's no one in mind..at least not now..!

Anonymous said...

ahaa karty,
nice one man...great job..but its put me into some kinda thinking...!!
hmm...!!!
dj

SpankMac said...

yup, some inspired thing it is. so, when's the next post saying who inspired it :)

CB said...

Umm..well..uh..mm..inspiration..uhh...hmm..

Ducky said...

Ok dude, out with it... who's the gal... it is ABSOLUTELY CLEAR that you are drawing from experience... and don't try to argue, I KNOW ;)

Makam said...

SEE..so many ppl cant be wrong...
dont deny the fact that someones there in your mind...
CB...cmon da..tell us..:p

xtremely_insane said...

well well well what do we have here? a guy going mush is always fun to see. as long as it isn't ur professor's daughter, i guess letting a girl know u love her ought to be pretty ok.
good piece of writing there. would love to see some more.

Vijay Shankar said...

great going man .
but i wud also love to know the inspiration